Rewrite an overexposed About section
Rewrite a public About section using role, proof, boundary, and contact path.
Owen's public About section mixes career proof with personal location, stale projects, and private contact details. Use Role, Proof, Boundary, Contact. The common trap is to add more detail to seem credible. More detail can bury the strongest proof and expose information the reader does not need. Role Start with the current job-to-be-understood: customer education lead helping B2B teams reduce onboarding friction. A current role line gives searchers a frame for all other evidence. Proof Add two public proof points: onboarding program, conference talk, published guide, or measurable result that is safe to share. Proof replaces generic self-description and makes…
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